Talk:Take That Down/@comment-24495864-20140126030650

Firey this is aweshummmm

I found a few mistakes though~

First, when it says 'They're love for each other--', it should be their. At one point you typed Vilpix, as well.

Anyway, I like how Flicker's character is developing, and her dream is mysterious... :O  I shall wait for more soon~ :D